Snow and Ice corrupt society.

Snow and Ice day

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The snow is beautiful

The ice is messy

The snow people can handle,

it’s the ice they can’t

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The ice got a handle on them

It’s like lights out

Why should this come about?

Accidents and sliding in ditches

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Is a hitch

It’s only a snow and ice day

that corrupt society.

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  • pattiann on Feb 3, 2010

    Great poem! I really enjoy your poems! You are very talented!

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 3, 2010

    Very Nice…I enjoyed it….

  • Pablina on Feb 3, 2010

    Good poem- its snowing here again today- its nice, but I am a bit fed up of it now. :)

  • Sushant94 on Feb 3, 2010

    good!

  • sambhafusia on Feb 3, 2010

    well written..really enjoyed in ur snowing…

  • martie on Feb 3, 2010

    Ice is dangerous, but it too can often be beautiful.

  • Atanacio on Feb 3, 2010

    nice entry and the pics are so cool

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 3, 2010

    We got a big snow here last weekend. Schools have been closed the whole week so far.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 3, 2010

    Good imagery!

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 3, 2010

    Winter in all it’s beauty, with all it’s dangers. The photos are just right.

  • Olive B. on Feb 3, 2010

    no knocking the ice…it looks so pretty but yeah its a murder…our minivan gets stuck all the time on icy hills. great one!

  • VTech on Feb 3, 2010

    Great Post

  • LoveDoctor on Feb 4, 2010

    Great poem. I love snow, but hate ice. It is very dangerous to drive too.

  • johnbee79 on Feb 4, 2010

    But truthfully it’s not the weather. Certainly not the ice, the snow or the sunshine even. It’s people who can’t get along with the environment. When we get real we’ll see that the weather is nice. All the time!

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 4, 2010

    Good one.

  • Frances Lawrence on Feb 4, 2010

    You are right it only takes a bit of snow and ice to mak everything grind to a halt.

  • albert1jemi on Feb 4, 2010

    great one

  • Carol M Creasey on Feb 4, 2010

    Very nice, and great pics.

  • lillyrose on Feb 4, 2010

    So true!

  • star2006 on Feb 11, 2010

    extremely classic! i like it

  • star2006 on Feb 11, 2010

    i like it

  • Gail Nobles on Feb 13, 2010

    There is snow in my yard today. Great poem.

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