An amusing poem about the differences and similarities between snowflakes and milkshakes.

Snowflakes,

Milkshakes,

Snowflakes are pretty.

Milkshakes are delicious.

Snowflakes are white.

Milkshakes can be white.

Snowflakes are cold.

Milkshakes can be cold.

Snowflakes accumulate.

Milkshakes do not.

I’d much rather have a milkshake

Than a snowflake.

When I have finished a milkshake,

I am done.

When the snowflakes fall and fall,

I am done when the shoveling is over.

You gain calories drinkiing a milkshake.

You lose calories shoveling snowflakes.

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Milkshakes make me feel full.

Snowflakes make me feel full of exhaustion.

I’ll settle for a milkshake please,

And hold the snowflakes.

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  • Yvhes P. on Dec 8, 2011

    Very nice poem. Great piece of work.

  • CHIPMUNK on Dec 8, 2011

    Well presented poetry

  • chuchi15 on Dec 21, 2011

    THAT WAS REALLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYY Cuuuuute!

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