Lust falls like snow.

Lay with me
In the night
Loving thee
Till sunlight
Our limbs
So entwined
Breathless whims
Unconfined
Whispered bliss
Snowing hard
Winter kiss
Fond regard
Don’t let go
Noble one
My love snows
Lust undone

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  • papaleng on Aug 13, 2009

    that was a very romantic and passionate desire!

  • raman13 on Aug 13, 2009

    Very Romantic Poem

    I like your poem

    Thanks

    Best Regards

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 13, 2009

    I loved that. very passionate.

    Christine

  • Lostash on Aug 13, 2009

    Yes, all of the above. I like short, snappy poetry!

  • Nisa West on Aug 13, 2009

    Lovely…! My favorite lines:

    …Whispered bliss
    Snowing hard
    Winter kiss
    Fond regard
    Don’t let go
    Noble one
    My love snows…

    Looking forward to reading more.

  • Shirley Shuler on Aug 13, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, yes, very passionate indeed!!

  • giftarist on Aug 14, 2009

    Wow! I like this

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