So Cold

Alaina Ellington on Aug 7, 2008

Tags: cold, depression, emotion, emotions, End, heart, heartless, Life, love, relationship, so cold, wall

How is it possible for a human being to be without emotion?

How can you just stand there?
So cold.
You’ve lost all emotion.
Take down your wall.
But you won’t.
You let it stand tall.
Can you hear me?
I’m screaming!
Can’t you see?
I’m depressed,
and so are you.
Just needing rest,
from the life we live.
But alas,
nothing will give.
This is who you are,
so now I must choose.
Can I still love you?
Despite the bruise.
I guess I’ll stay,
win or lose!

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roberto sardelli on Aug 7, 2008
Very powerful poem, well written and to the point. Brilliant
Eden Emersen on Aug 7, 2008
Relationships are difficult, aren’t they. . . I love how you capture the moments so well.
Glynis Smy on Aug 8, 2008
Strong words, well versed I enjoyed this piece thanks for sharing
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 22, 2010
Tragic. Ive said it before that the worst kind of loneliness is the loneliness you feel when you have a mate but you live almost as if you don’t.

Its better to come home to an empty house you know is empty. You have no pretense of someone being there to greet you or listening to you purge yourself of the days pains and frustrations. But when you have a mate and yet you cant communicate with them effectively you constantly disappointed and let down.

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