So Good

yes me on Sep 2, 2010

An Acrostic one hmm.

Never fell at your feet, loved you all the same

Even in your corner cafes n bars 5Th 6 Th 7Th

West side man hat on head said yeah!

You: you just light me up, Me I don’t jive

Only do the Harlem shuffle

Rex my motion teach me trix

Keep me up all night

….

No I don’t cuss n I don’t fuss

Even for a Candy scream

West side, East side, South side up north

You look like a million pixels on a brush

Open nights sidewalk theatre catch it later

Rodeo! on the Radio Jewl ay anny on his Fanny

Kinematic square in Time well , I thought it rhymed

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Comments (17)

Kathleen Murphy on Sep 2, 2010
Slick poem, it has a great urban feel! It makes me think of city streets and subways.
Jimmy Shilaho on Sep 2, 2010
A good one, cheers.
Joie Schmidt on Sep 2, 2010
Unique work*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
Kaye TM on Sep 2, 2010
i love it! =p acrostics are really fun!
heidiefernandez on Sep 2, 2010
nice poetry… as usual….
carissimi on Sep 2, 2010
nice poem.. hey i just wrote a poem about a man in a hat.. .must be something in the air… lol
Ethics0006 on Sep 2, 2010
Good Work
Anuradha Ramkumar on Sep 3, 2010
A gr8 poem.
GodsGrace on Sep 3, 2010
Beautiful Poem
LoveDoctor on Sep 3, 2010
Good one. nice rhyme.
PSingh1990 on Sep 3, 2010
Nice one….

thanks for share.
Fassy on Sep 3, 2010
Nice one….
rajaryanme on Sep 3, 2010
Beautifully written.
Christine Ramsay on Sep 3, 2010
I love this take on New York. I am not sure whether it would appeal to me or not.

Christine
LewSethics on Sep 3, 2010
I’ll have what you are smoking.
giftarist on Sep 3, 2010
Liked it, friend. Cheers!
ishinimrod on Sep 4, 2010
Excellent!

Hi there!