It’s about feeling bad and fighting the urge to make others feel just as bad as you.

Dark thoughts
Trace every corner of my brain
The wicked sins
The thought to come
Like a child coloring on a wall
Like blood splattering everywhere
Do you hear the
Drip, Drip
On that shallow water
That water that is not water
And it strangles me
Stills my soul
Do I defy everyone?
Then become enraged
When they defy me
Slap them
Just to make them cry
As I cry
So I am not alone
So, do you hear the
Drip, Drip
On that shallow water
That water that is not water

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  • Lee Altman on Feb 24, 2009

    Most people will have a hard time to comment on this one , but I like it. I totally get it.

  • clay hurtubise on Apr 10, 2009

    Nice work, fully understand where your coming from.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Poetic Enigma on Apr 10, 2009

    I like this, and understand as well,
    Very well expressed

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