So Near and Yet So Far

nobert soloria bermosa on Nov 27, 2008

Tags: love, secret lovers, silent partners

Silent partners.

I want to hold you
Touch you and kiss you
But I could not
I’ll have to contend myself
Looking at you and
Talking to you
Casually, as much as I could
I don’t want to stare
Into your eyes
‘Coz blood will be flowing
Fast into my heart again
And I may not be able
To hold on to myself
And I will come rushing
Close to you again
I don’t want this to happen
‘Coz it will jeopardize everything

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James DeVere on Nov 27, 2008
Blood rushing into my heart. I felt that. Oh, the restraint! The holding back. Does she want it? What does she want….god, if only I could share your shoes…I would strain for that kiss. Love is messy, kind, soft, restrained, held-back.. everything.

Don’t let them minx you. j
Unofre Pili on Nov 27, 2008
I’m in full agreement with James. This is an innovative piece, combining romantic and brutal imagery.
Leo Reyes on Nov 27, 2008
nice piece you\’ve got here Norbert!
swapna on Nov 27, 2008
very nice..
goodselfme on Nov 27, 2008
What a daunting write filled with wishful outcomes. Wishing you well, my friend.
Blue Buttefly on Nov 27, 2008
Wow, poem filled with romance!
Juancav on Nov 27, 2008
Nice poem,feeling a hesitant love.
Allison Jae on Nov 27, 2008
Torturous almost love story.
Melody SJAL on Nov 27, 2008
Oh, the sweetest agony. Nice piece.
eddiego65 on Nov 28, 2008
I felt your struggle of emotion within. Great piece, bro.
PR Mace on Nov 28, 2008
Well done. What agony to love and not know if it is returned. I wish you all the best, my friend.
joystick7 on Nov 28, 2008
Good work!!
xoxo on Nov 29, 2008
so sad yet beautifully written…
CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 29, 2008
Another good piece to read!
roberto sardelli on Nov 29, 2008
Very well written Buddy, keep up the good work Bddy

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