Comments on: So You’ve Become

By: GooGoo

GooGoo — Thu, 05 Mar 2009 00:03:25 +0000

I agree with Puke. Most of your stuff is pathetic self indulgence. Grow up and live with the sometimes not so perfect life. We all do!

By: Puke

Puke — Fri, 07 Nov 2008 12:02:38 +0000

This is word vomit. You suck

By: Donald Barr

Donald Barr — Sun, 07 Sep 2008 19:31:42 +0000

Double ouch!! I better not record my troubles. I liked it.

By: Beaman of Pen Me A Poem

Beaman of Pen Me A Poem — Mon, 21 Jul 2008 20:08:05 +0000

A very sad poem. I hope it’s not related to your real life.
Well written.

By: Michael L.odispoto

Michael L.odispoto — Sat, 12 Jul 2008 21:30:51 +0000

Love and the great times wouldn’t be as good if it weren’t for the experiences that we’d prefer to have skipped or even forget. They are though a part of us just as much as the good or great relationships. We live and we learn, we touch the stove and get burned. Then touch it again because we like what we cook. Whether a great meal, cake or whatever. But what we cook requires intense heat, like relationships and love. Every cook gets burned.

You said ” There will not be a 101″. That would mean you can suddenly become not human. That’s a hard thing to do for anyone I’d think. It may look like that for you now but time does a great job at helping us adjust.
I know a way to look at things like this in a better light. A little trick you can make yourself think along the same lines. With each relationship that hurts and ends, say to yourself ” Wow, I’m one closer to that one that will be great” .
It is a numbers game after all. A lot of people don’t like to look at it that way, but it is true.
I understand that your creative juices flow from your experiences. It is though a fact that it is how we look at situations that dictates your emotions. Reminds me of
George Costanza in Seinfeld where he decided to do the opposite of what he always did. It’s really funny if you like Seinfeld. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKUvKE3bQlY

By: kimberly bock

kimberly bock — Wed, 09 Jul 2008 12:53:02 +0000

Hey Paul,

Long haul? I’m a loner anyway.

By: paul mcintosh

paul mcintosh — Tue, 08 Jul 2008 22:17:32 +0000

ouch. ya gotta feel to heal i was once told. that doesn’t make it easier, just closer. i do like it. still, ouch.

By: kimberly bock

kimberly bock — Tue, 08 Jul 2008 20:31:39 +0000

Yup, Same man. Same heartache. I guess this makes it the 100th time? ;-(

There will not be 101.

By: IcyCucky

IcyCucky — Tue, 08 Jul 2008 11:57:06 +0000

Wonderful poem! I can sense a vulnerable feeling..