And she walks lightly on rose petals…

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They line her way through the shrubbery
And the night that grays
And dips softly into tomorrow

She gazes at the deep and unending sky
Breathes in gently, for it’s a pleasant beautiful night
And, the scents of foliage and flowers perfectly combine

The white picket fence, creaks familiarly in the wind
She smiles to herself, for it has always fondly reminded her of him.

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  • Judy Sheldon-Walker on Dec 8, 2007

    Very pretty poem.

  • TP Sage on Dec 8, 2007

    Beautiful. So simple, the emotion created effortlessly.

    “…the night that grays
    And dips softly into tomorrow”

    I loved that

  • Darlene McFarlane on Dec 9, 2007

    Very nice. It gave me a gentle happy feeling.

  • KathySpring on Dec 12, 2007

    Simple Beauty. So simple and beautiful and by no way cheese. Keep Up The Good Work

  • Liane Schmidt on Jun 1, 2008

    Dear Judy, thank you so very much.

    Dear TP Sage, I truly appreciate your compliment.

    Dear Darlene, that makes me so happy to hear.

    Dear KathySpring, I am beyond happy that my poem can across the way I wanted it to.

    Blessings & best wishes to all.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • OhSugar on Feb 13, 2009

    Of course I like it. Simple and romantic.

  • OhSugar on Apr 3, 2009

    Still like it just as much as the first time I read it.

  • irishpen on Jun 6, 2009

    nice!!!! I love what I have read so far of your work!!

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