A love poem.

A quiet night,the two of us,the lights are turned down low.

The music plays ,the song we know,we dance so very slow.

You look at me,so beautiful ,a word was never said.

I kiss your lips, you take my hand and lead me to your bed.

We share our love for the first time,our bodies become one.

We linger in sweet ecstasy, until the morning sun.

I feel desire grow ,as sunlight plays across your skin,

With kisses and caresses we make sweet love again.

So pure and true our first night together,our love was so brand new.

You had always been my love love, so softly given this heart to you.

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Comments (11)
  • cardy on Jan 24, 2010

    So sweet a lovely write it’s got the awww factor I must say, liked this a lot.

  • amandeep13 on Jan 24, 2010

    nice work.

  • clay hurtubise on Jan 24, 2010

    Very nice.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Butterfly Musings on Jan 24, 2010

    Wow, this is beyond Beautiful
    truly remarkable!!

    You are very inspirational!!

  • Payge on Jan 24, 2010

    Beautifully written with a sensual touch,liked it alot.

  • katie marie on Jan 24, 2010

    I beautiful tribute to a couple’s first night of sharing themselves completely.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jan 24, 2010

    Lovely*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • S A JOHNSON on Jan 24, 2010

    Sweet and romantic

  • miraj on Jan 25, 2010

    A mini-gem.

  • K Kristie on Jan 26, 2010

    nicely done.

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 11, 2010

    It’s what true love is all about, so touching and as always, so well written.

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