Softness in The Air

carissimi on Sep 27, 2010

Rather melancholy feel.

softness in the air

rather light and jolly feel

to the gentleness in bloom

in the motions in the waves

the swaying of the wind

bringing sounds as it sings

as the morning birds fly

so softly gliding by

as if they feel the softness

in the air as they fly

the sun is shining lightly

rays full of sweetness and

full of lovely life

my carrisimi time is slipping by

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Comments (14)

Sunjhini on Sep 27, 2010
such beautifulll imagery … beautifully written
Atanacio on Sep 27, 2010
very good entry
agrant10 on Sep 27, 2010
Nice poem
rajeev bhargava on Sep 27, 2010
a really wonderful poem and a delight to read too. thanks for sharing.
pearl2010 on Sep 27, 2010
Amazing poem. Thanks for this.
My World on Sep 27, 2010
Nice Post……

thanks for share.
Ethics0006 on Sep 27, 2010
VEry Nice Share
SuperMember on Sep 28, 2010
nice poem
Raj the Tora on Sep 28, 2010
great one
Christine Ramsay on Sep 28, 2010
A beautiful and calming poem.

Christine
Sudheer Birodkar on Sep 28, 2010
I like your lyrical style. Congrats
Jswana on Sep 28, 2010
Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
dak on Sep 29, 2010
Beautiful, nostalgic poem
Adelnica Amor R. Izon on Oct 6, 2010
invigorating^^

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