His touch comforts.

I lay here in the darkness, lost in my eternal loneliness
My body cold and trembling in despair, embraced in sorrow
Then suddenly you touch me softly, surrounding me with solace

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  • Jenny Heart on Aug 20, 2009

    It is as simple as that. Like it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 20, 2009

    Lovely work.

  • ken bultman on Aug 20, 2009

    Sometimes that’s all it takes.

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 20, 2009

    short sweet and to the point, Love It!! :)

  • papaleng on Aug 20, 2009

    Love can be expressed with saying a word. So short yet to the point.

  • kathie107 on Aug 20, 2009

    That is so sweet :’)

  • Shirley Shuler on Aug 20, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, solace is bliss, well said in so few words!!

  • Lostash on Aug 22, 2009

    Few words, much emotion!

  • Amanda Patrick on Aug 29, 2009

    So much feeling in so few words, I like this type of writing, and it isn’t easy!

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