Soldier so sure ignore your poor – too participate with the fate.

soldier so sure ignore your poor

too participate with the fate

ya just to anticipate what will forsake

when no more,will send youyour reply

will you join in to never die

and live to self relye

so you heard,now step-aside was their cry

all outside the space and time

cordinating that life,immortal to be i cee

soldier so sure “in your eyes”

we spoke of a lie

holdin hope to the design

of whats alive to die

as at our best we will try

to not deny your ride on SIDE

all in that kind of mind

in love with what you find

soldier so sure do you die,your pure

gathering within,the rageing wind

now no regret with your free will{ing(sin?)}

ya that sense in pretense

again off its hook

to suggest to me

no mistakes with that past

cuz it keeps you aware of what to seek

the divine or the freak ya whatever you’ll think

soldier so sure it must be,just me

so carry on

till your life falls asleep

8
Liked it
Comments (4)
  • swatilohani on May 25, 2009

    awesome

  • Joe Dorish on May 25, 2009

    Good

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 2, 2009

    No sure what the message is. I like the beat.

  • KerryAnn on Aug 25, 2009

    I like it alot, the last verse is a perfect ending.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading