A love poem.

We will snuggle contently on the waterbed,

listening to the silence of the night.

You will stroke my warm naked flesh,

seducing me with your intimate touch.

I will savor the feel of your lush lips,

tenderly suckling my aching breasts.

You will leave me shuddering in ecstasy,

from your skillful erotic techniques.

We will make slow passionate love,

enjoying our solitary time together.

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Comments (23)
  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 5, 2009

    Mmmmm! Very tantalising.

    Christine

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 5, 2009

    Wow. I was young once too. Even had a water bed. Thanks for describing my memories so well. I’ll be watching for more.

  • K.Reshma on Nov 5, 2009

    Great

  • Emma Green on Nov 5, 2009

    Raunchy!

  • ashan1614 on Nov 5, 2009

    WHOA! Sounds like the perfect night of unbridled passion. :)

  • xoxo on Nov 5, 2009

    Wow… A good read. Well done on this.

  • ken bultman on Nov 5, 2009

    I hope the bed doesn\’t spring a leak.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 5, 2009

    That was very erotic.

  • STEVE666 on Nov 5, 2009

    ‘Tenderly suckling my aching breasts’ ??

    Darla! You tease!

  • Hansika on Nov 5, 2009

    awesome

  • neet on Nov 5, 2009

    Hmm……..Passionate!

  • alc on Nov 5, 2009

    Sexy! I liked it! Thanks for the share!

  • Goodselfme on Nov 5, 2009

    You explained your passion well with this well done piece.

  • Themax on Nov 5, 2009

    Liked It very much,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Linda Lori on Nov 5, 2009

    Great one!

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 5, 2009

    This was a wonderful poem filled with passion and lust,very nicely expressed!!

  • Petalm on Nov 6, 2009

    Wow, lots of readers will be taking cold showers after this one!

  • Jane Jane on Nov 6, 2009

    passionate piece.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 6, 2009

    A very passionate piece! You are good at this.. God bless.

  • lillyrose on Nov 6, 2009

    this was great! I love a bit of erotica!

  • fragile18 on Nov 6, 2009

    nice poem!

  • Melody SJAL on Nov 7, 2009

    So passionate.

  • Aiyanna on Nov 8, 2009

    Very passionate!!! :)

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