Someday

Katie Marie on Oct 19, 2009

Tags: death, Dreams, future, hopes, Life, plans

That illusive day in the future.

I’ll travel to foreign and distant lands.
See the sites, that is my plan.

     When? When will you travel to foreign and distant lands,
      See the sites, fulfill your plan?

Someday…someday.

Renew acquaintances with my old friends,
With those I’ve offended make amends.

      When? When will you renew acquaintances with old friends,
      With those offended make amends?

Someday…someday.

Give of my time to those in need,
Give of my charity the hungry to feed.

      When? When will you give your time to those in need,
      Give of your charity the hungry to feed?

Someday…someday.

Captain a sailboat across the waves,
Follow new paths that the Spirit paves.

      When? When will you captain a sailboat across the waves,
      Follow new paths that the Spirit paves?

Someday…someday.

I’ll be dying, you know, leaving this earth.
Ending the days I’ve counted since birth.

When? When will you die and leave this earth,
End the days you’ve counted since birth?

Someday…someday.

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cutedrishti8 on Oct 19, 2009
A great piece of work..
ken bultman on Oct 19, 2009
Lot of food for thought. Today might be a good day to start. Tomorrows tend to be unreliable.
hfj on Oct 19, 2009
Great poem and format Katie. I really liked the words, style, and meaning of this piece. Well done friend
Vikram Chhabra on Oct 19, 2009
I am sure that the day will come very soon…:)
Karen Gross on Oct 19, 2009
The years fly faster and faster the older we get. My Mom died at 61, she never got to do all the things that were waiting until she retired.
Debra. on Oct 19, 2009
That is a lovely inspiring to-do list! Great piece and thought process.
miraj on Oct 19, 2009
awesome,ma’am.

An illusive day in future indeed.I often wonder what did i do to leave a trace in this earth.the answer ,I will find ,someday….someday.
Kelly Melang on Oct 19, 2009
Great work, my list has a few checks on it, plan on adding more!
STEVE666 on Oct 19, 2009
There is a profound ’someday never’ message there, Kate. Well written.
Lily River on Oct 20, 2009
Death is a sad part of life and it depends on how we deal with it, but I think that you deal with it beautifully. Nice write.
Melody SJAL on Oct 24, 2009
Very nicely done, Katie.
spiritwalker on Oct 27, 2009
nice flow in this one. I wonder did anyone notice the feeling that you had not fullfilled what you wanted.

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