All thing in life will pass.

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I have so much to tell you, not sure where to begin.

I’m glad you’ve always been there a lover and a friend.

The thing is life gets crazy, so much gets left undone.

And though I do not like it, Someday I’ll be gone.

Long before I met you ,my life was not so well.

I would drink and fight and act a fool, I’d say “oh what the hell.”

I did not care for much ,thought no-one cared for me.

Too many doors slammed in my face, and me with out a key.

Then you came into my life and brought your love and joy.

At first I though that I was cool,  Sometimes I’m such a boy.

I wasn’t always nice to you , And for that I am ashamed.

When ever things got really tough, on you I’d push the blame.

With time it seems comes wisdom, not saying that I’m wise.

But I’m grateful for the time with you and I hope you realize.

Someday I’ll be gone, for all in life must pass.

I did not want to leave you here with questions yet to ask.

Did I really love you? Yes my dear I do.

Was I very Happy ? Especially so with you.

Did I have regrets? I can think of only one.

Leaving you here alone,for Someday I’ll be gone.

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  • Kate Smedley on Apr 11, 2009

    That’s beautiful FJ, it’s so important to tell people how we feel while we can, is this for your wife? Lovely tribute if it is.

  • Mr Ghaz on Apr 11, 2009

    That was lovely poem and well presented..Lov it! well done and thnx for sharing

  • payge on Apr 11, 2009

    That was kinda sad but beautiful,its never easy leaving anyone.Well writen,I liked it.

  • Bullwinkle Muse on Apr 11, 2009

    My wife and I never leave the house without saying, “I love you.” Thanks.

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 11, 2009

    A very poignant and beautiful poem. It is a reminder to us all not to take those we love for granted.


  • Luffy12 on Apr 11, 2009

    wow great

  • papaleng on Apr 11, 2009

    that was so sweet, always doing things to let your love one knows that you love her.

  • nutuba on Apr 11, 2009

    Nicely done, FJ!

  • cleblanc on Apr 11, 2009

    beautiful. we do need to let people know how we feel. we are never promised tomorrow.

  • hollynoel001 on Apr 11, 2009

    you do great job in expressing feelings whether sorrow or love keep up the good i love your stuff :) )

  • Joshua Miguel on Apr 11, 2009

    beautiful work. you really expressed it very well.

  • The Quail on Apr 11, 2009

    This is awesome work; very well done!

  • ShaFar on Apr 12, 2009

    There is a time for every purpose under the heaven. Sad but true someday we will all be gone. Great poem and speaks the truth.

  • Juancav on Apr 12, 2009

    Realistic poem,everthing in this world turns to an end.

  • rutherfranc on Apr 12, 2009

    sentiments of a man at peace with himself…

  • Denise Kawaii on Apr 13, 2009

    That is a really touching poem and a great reminder to appreciate what we have today because it may not be with us tomorrow.

  • Scout on Apr 19, 2009

    Thanks again for your welcome, love life and family, cherished and respected always by those who have a grounded insight into what is actually important. love your work.universal blessings

  • Joni Keith on Apr 25, 2009

    This is so selfless and beautiful. Maybe we should all take time to say this to the ones we love. Absolutely beautiful flow to your writing as well.

  • blahhhh on May 3, 2009

    Gorgeous! Wonderful!
    I have no words!

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