Another poet of love a newcomer in the battlefiedls of love.

Love you teach me

 

 

You come to teach me

 

All about how to love

 

I have been in love all my life

 

You are a young budding youth

 

Without experience yet

 

Still a loveliest lover

 

You will become

 

On that I can surely

 

Take a bet

 

Love you come to teach me

Do you?

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  • BRUCE KELLY McCURDY on Nov 22, 2009

    A good poem about love and waiting for love. More depth than your earlier try. You`ve succeeded.Continue!!

  • sweet sunshine143 on Nov 22, 2009

    Good one!

  • drelayaraja on Nov 22, 2009

    Great one. Should someone teach?

  • Themax on Nov 23, 2009

    really good,Thanks :)

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 23, 2009

    good one.

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