Someone who changes everything and doesnt even realise.

From tears to smiles,

From pain to relief,

From black to white,

You helped me lift my grief.

From trusting nobody to trusting you,

believing in me and my ability too.

From bottling up to confiding in you,

From giving up to seeing things through.

I love you.

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Comments (5)
  • Pithom on Nov 19, 2009

    Simply… elegant.

    That would melt a heart I’m sure.

  • livemike on Nov 19, 2009

    Great poem….Keep writing always…Dadxxx

  • LoveDoctorGoodBye on Nov 19, 2009

    Lovely poem. very nicely written.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 20, 2009

    Beautifully written!

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 22, 2009

    Darla said it. Beautifully written.

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