A poem that literally jumped out of my mind!

We all know, there is something

more to our lives.

Are we merely floating around

or do we have a destiny?

As Forest Gump said,

“Maybe it’s both.”

*

I see chaos in the streets,

and innocence in a child.

There are some things sacred

that can never be defiled.

*

Getting lost in the details,

one may miss the bigger picture.

We’re all loved from above.

A star that never fades.

*

We’re not forced to live,

but given a choice of paths.

The choice of right and wrong.

How will you write your song?

***

*Note: The first sentence is borrowed from a Veil of Maya song named “Codex”.

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Comments (11)
  • babygirl3605 on Jul 30, 2010

    I liked this. Good job

  • sasuke191 on Jul 31, 2010

    Wonderful poem!!.. ^^

  • princessFizza on Jul 31, 2010

    Great work!..

  • Ammar H. on Jul 31, 2010

    Nice poem! Sometimes stuff that just pops into your head is better than things that take lots of time and effort to write

  • Joseph Scott on Jul 31, 2010

    Thanks everyone! :)

  • Likha on Aug 3, 2010

    I’ve asked the same question many times. I can feel your heart in this. Looking forward to the next one. Be sure to catch it.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 3, 2010

    Well done,

  • Joseph Scott on Aug 3, 2010

    Thank you Likha and Ruby :)

  • Michal Dorcak on Aug 7, 2010

    Great poem.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Aug 9, 2010

    The choice is always ours. Good poem.

  • Joie Schmidt on Aug 14, 2010

    A thoughtful piece*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

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