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Something Weird is Going on

Darla Cooke on Jun 29, 2009
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Danger is lurking nearby.

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It’s a cold and rainy night.

Something weird is going on.

I can sense danger lurking nearby,

a menacing growl pierces the silence.

Suddenly I find myself being chased,

pursued by many invisible demons.

Strange beings are watching me,

from deep with the eerie forest.

A horrible smell fills the air.

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  • goodselfme on Jun 29, 2009

    well done!

  • ken bultman on Jun 29, 2009

    Good poem. Now I’m not going to be able to sleep.

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 29, 2009

    Fun piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • rajeev bhargava on Jun 29, 2009

    very spooky and creepy poem 100% entertaining!

  • Deep Blue on Jun 29, 2009

    That’s your trademark, hair raising lines…love it.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 29, 2009

    spooky and chilling,

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jun 29, 2009

    I’ve had nightmares like that. Enjoyed this muches!

    Keep on creeping

    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • irishpen on Jun 29, 2009

    Scary! Love the pic with it, too!

  • HeyZel on Jun 30, 2009

    Nice poem. Though the picture scares me.

  • kate smedley on Jun 30, 2009

    Chilling fun poem!

  • stumbleuponwriter on Jun 30, 2009

    Very well done, Darla..

  • lowellpendon on Jul 1, 2009

    this is real fun, tonight i’ve been reading your creepy stuff and wondering it this creepy story starting from your creepy cemetery, will give me a nice sleep, heheh.

  • rizzei on Jul 1, 2009

    creepy but nice, i say:)

  • Amanda N Miller on Jul 1, 2009

    Nice piece.

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 12, 2009

    it’s really nice…

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