We all must learn to face our lives’ weaknesses and strong points alike boldy.

Sometimes

Sometimes I really feel

There’s someone eaves dropping

On my broadminded thought and writing

 

Sometimes I feel

My once dear ones

Are also now my poems copying?

I also feel those who did betray

Had no humour

I now know anyway.

 

When I feel the urge to speak my mind

You know I can also shout

But anger and shouting

Are only short of half madness

Of that there can be no doubting

 

So friends and foes

I love you still

Wash off your anger

But if you will

 

If you feel I have done you harm

Do not go and raise an alarm

Fight it out in the open with me

If I lose

I shall bow down low to thee

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments (6)
  • Billyfnstacy on Nov 20, 2009

    Creative.

  • craigz on Nov 20, 2009

    very good!

  • drelayaraja on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice one. I liked the pictures.

  • wonder on Nov 21, 2009

    Oh!!!!!!!!!!

  • Judi Eddy on Nov 21, 2009

    very interesting poem. judi x

  • Annashank on Nov 21, 2009

    Very Interesting!!! :-D

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