Song of Sorts

Goodselfme on Nov 5, 2009

This swings but is not the usual song with usual messages either.

Photo is by Roberta Baxter: Part of the run off from the snow on the glaciers in Glacier National Park, West Glacier, Montana

Song of Sorts

I sing a song of sadness, full of tears I cry

Never to recover from that special guy.

Now I need to change the words of my little song

Because I am not spending my whole life long.

My thoughts are moving, and like the rapid stream

I am planning on working toward a much happier dream.

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Comments (17)

CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 5, 2009
You can change it with your wisdom and inner strength. Good luck then!
ken bultman on Nov 5, 2009
That’s a dandy ditty and a gorgeous photo.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 5, 2009
Nice one
giftarist on Nov 5, 2009
Nice piece and at some point thought provoking!
papaleng on Nov 5, 2009
Very beautiful. Yes , my friend with your dreams in hand you can move on with ease.
Jenny Heart on Nov 5, 2009
Bravo! Dream on!!
chitragopi on Nov 5, 2009
Wish you are rewarded for your work and your dreams come true.
Dendro Azures on Nov 5, 2009
And with no doubt that happier dream will come true!
Darla Cooke on Nov 5, 2009
Very nice!
xoxo on Nov 5, 2009
Niece piece. I’ve enjoyed the read.
neet on Nov 5, 2009
Beutifully written. I like the picture too.
Tracey Parece on Nov 5, 2009
Lovely picture. Beautiful poem. I am sure we can all relate to the emotion in the poem. Have a great day.
Poetic Enigma on Nov 5, 2009
Both sad and uplifting, but a very well composed piece full of wisdom too. and that is a lovely photograph as well! Thanks for sharing
Will Gray on Nov 5, 2009
You go girl!
Aiyanna on Nov 5, 2009
Very touching and well written!!!
T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 6, 2009
Good write. I’m very glad you recovered from the romantic disaster.
Aldeano on Nov 6, 2009
Simple and unforgettable.

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