Lured into my doom with the beauty of his eyes.

Dearest love of mine and most amazing muse,

painful and so kind; I think I’m falling out of love with you.

Unforgettable desire you engraved throughout my skin,

you lured me with your fire into a mesmerizing sin.

The song is that charisma your eyes just softly sang to me,

beautiful the siren I saw explicitly.

That drew me into falling and then into distress,

making me surrender and settling for less.

But now I feel the difference I think that I have tired,

my heart no longer yearns to your love acquire.

My temptation has derailed from the magnet on your lips,

I think my tears prevailed the magic of your finger tips.

Sorry that it took me long to say the words I hid,

truth is everyday I loved you more because of everything you did.

Today, in front of you it’s not so hard to refrain from your embrace,

I’ve come this far and I don’t know I think you may have been replaced.

If that’s the case then I must say I think it’s for the best,

I did try getting you in every way and there was no success.

Getting far away from you is simple and you know that it is true,

the task that is invincible is: who makes me feel like you?

You malevolent leviathan who ate my strength away,

the music of this ecstasy don’t leave me words to say.

Fragile are my instincts when we are just feet apart,

but truly I’ve been poisoning your love out of my heart.

Deadly is your rhythm but I’ll confess what’s really true,

the day another skin I crave I’ll be completely over you.

And I think…

That day has come, another siren already, sung.

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Comments (9)
  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 7, 2009

    hmmm, way to go.

  • F J McCarthy on Nov 8, 2009

    very well written and full of emotion, thanks F J.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 8, 2009

    Absolutely beautiful Johanny.Your usage of poetic wording is supurb!Love it!!

  • deep blue on Nov 10, 2009

    Very passionately written.

  • Reilley on Nov 15, 2009

    You are certainly a poet I will be watching.

  • Themax on Nov 17, 2009

    beautiful and very passionate writing,Thanks :)

  • Nisa West on Nov 21, 2009

    Nice! I really like this:

    “That drew me into falling and then into distress,
    making me surrender and settling for less.
    But now I feel the difference I think that I have tired…”
    AND
    “My temptation has derailed from the magnet on your lips.”

    If you would like more thorough “critique” of your work let me know. I enjoy reading your words, so it would be fun for me.

  • S A JOHNSON on Nov 25, 2009

    The flow was great, another enjoyable read.

  • ShadowPsychos on Apr 30, 2010

    brilliant :)

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