So basically, I just write songs for this small band I’m in, in Florida, and honestly I’m just curious to what anyone thinks about the lyrics. I’m not big on bragging about how abstract or deep my words are, I just try to be honest, but if you think anythings just ridiculous, out of place or just some first class b.s let me know, I honestly am all about any feedback….ANY feedback ha, and really I don’t know if anyone’s going to read this, but I’m just going to throw it out there and see what happens, hopefully you enjoy. This one I wrote last week.
Jeremiah Johnston
Let me keep you in the summer
As hibernation breaks the curse
Of all the day’s lovers
Like the pain doesn’t stop
At the end of birth
Keep me in mind
When the footprints
Of memory are all frozen over
And the wind has beaten
Down all the warning signs
Like lazily swatting flies
I keep my mistakes at a distance
But close enough to my side
Since moving on has
Been like a mirror
Trying to turn a blind eye to all it sees
And I’m too busy trying
To talk before I breathe
As the southwest sun
Beat down rays of thread
Weaving down and blurring
The highway lines like
My skin pacifies my head
Letting go a leaking pipe
Flooding me to the ceiling
Till I can no longer look back
Like a sidewalk there’s no
Quick way to fill all the cracks
And I’m remembering times
Of me in spiritual minds
Like looking in her eyes
As clocks just a reminder
Of all the passed time
But for all the hands raised
In syncopated truth
As the rain off the roof
I’ve never seen it end
In a way I can mend
As a skyline splits the sky
The line in the sand
Is washing away from faith’s tide
I want that old time religion
Of heart not funds
Of all the times we smiled blankly
If just for release
Like Jeremiah Johnston
Abandoned Nile baskets
But a heart to keep on
Since I’m too busy
Being born to worry about dying
Like a brushfire it’s spreading quickly
But it leaves like
A coming storm’s breeze
I’m coming back Father
Just remember me
Chorus
The ghost never leaves
Unless you open the door
You should have known by now
I’m not letting your eyes
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