Falling in love.

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An ordinary day of September,

no time for daydreams, the mind grows weary,

of learning and reading, too much to bear.

Thus lazily, hours become cheery.

I gazed upon a new discovery,

as it transforms into an interest.

Something exquisite like a strawberry,

with such delightful scent I crave to taste.

Familiar face yet a different look,

a Sherlock’s mystery to be unfold.

Splendid distractions better than a book,

and as moments slip, forever I hold.

Child in into a lady, lost in a dream,

of love’s enchantment, it’s opaline stream.

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  • papaleng on Nov 7, 2010

    you did it Phoenix.. coming out with such a well-composed piece.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 7, 2010

    Unique and lovely poem! Keep it up lol…

  • awesome11 on Nov 7, 2010

    great share! thanks!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 7, 2010

    That is so beautiful and cleverly written. I have never tried writing a sonnet.

    Christine

  • BC Doan on Nov 7, 2010

    You’re quite a gifted poet, with such wonderful poem, Phoenix!

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 7, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • PARAM on Nov 7, 2010

    Good one….

    thanks for share.

  • Roe2115 on Nov 7, 2010

    A true poet. Beautiful sonnet.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 7, 2010

    Well done,

  • Tulan on Nov 7, 2010

    love is beautiful.

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 7, 2010

    So lovely!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • CA Johnson on Nov 7, 2010

    Your sonnet was so beautiful. I love to read your poems because everything you write is amazing.

  • Kaye TM on Nov 7, 2010

    lovely share. =p

  • dak on Nov 8, 2010

    Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

  • dino renaldo on Nov 8, 2010

    good poem

  • yes me on Nov 9, 2010

    Excellent writing cheers

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 10, 2010

    Very smart.

  • lillyrose on Nov 11, 2010

    This was so beautifully written! and very clever!! It didn’t sound so ordinary to me.

  • Souldose on Nov 12, 2010

    Oh my, this belongs in those timeless big books, you’re good and I think in future you will be in those books

  • athena goodlight on Nov 15, 2010

    lovely poem. Thanks for sharing

  • Ubel Ein on Nov 16, 2010

    You never cease to dazzle me with your talent!

  • aakashanukul on Nov 17, 2010

    i like lot of

  • crisdiwata on Nov 18, 2010

    good job!

  • humor on Nov 27, 2010

    that is little deep..thank you

  • johnnydod on Nov 27, 2010

    A new Shakespeare mayhap? lovely sonnet Phoenix

    Let me not to the marriage of true minds
    Admit impediments, love is not love
    Which alters when it alteration finds,
    Or bends with the remover to remove.
    O no, it is an ever-fixed mark

  • J M Lennox on Dec 4, 2010

    Wow – that was lovely.

  • revivor on Dec 10, 2010

    a lovely story with a great flow

  • ittech on Feb 29, 2012

    Very well put. Your words speak for themselves.:)

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