A reworking of my sonnets and poems.

She was standing in a glimmer of light,

Her eyes glittered just like stars so bright.

So big wide and opened; like pearls beneath oceans depth,

She appeared like an angel such beauty in light of brilliance.

Like a tune in a ballad striking harmony,

A soft touch in fleeting kiss; your fair complexion circles one,

With all of you welded in my mind forever in time.

Long flowing hair and soft highlights in moonlight.

White angel born under stars of Venus.

In all adoring and flowing glory,

Awaiting patiently is the goddess of love.

Your eyes are alluring like deep pools spinning,

Your soft lips as sweet as they are sensuous,

The contours of your body; shapely and tender.

The angelic image awaits soft lights and promised love,

Such beauty is unique as inner quality is divine

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  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 23, 2010

    Romantic, to say the least.

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 23, 2010

    What a fantastic description. A beautiful sonnet.

    Christine

  • Lord Banks on Apr 23, 2010

    Words are magical when used properly and you did, nice piece. LB

  • lillyrose on Apr 26, 2010

    beautiful Pete, the imagery used was so clear I could almost touch it!

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 27, 2010

    Oh, that’s so poetic.

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