Comments on: Sorcery

By: B|ahx3`

B|ahx3` — Wed, 14 Nov 2007 20:23:54 +0000

ZAI ! danny all the way !

By: YaNz

YaNz — Mon, 12 Nov 2007 15:30:21 +0000

It’s quite okay actually this poem of yours… but the thing is, you don’t really have to use complex words to write a poem of deep meaning.. just use simple words will do… this is to make your poem more enjoyable for readers who don’t have as wide as a vocabulary… just my suggestion that’s all…

By: weiming

weiming — Mon, 12 Nov 2007 15:16:52 +0000

perfect command of the language. totally remarkable.

By: xsomebodyx

xsomebodyx — Mon, 12 Nov 2007 14:40:26 +0000

wow that’s some good vocab.
Kudos to you sia.

By: asd

asd — Mon, 12 Nov 2007 13:47:14 +0000

hey you got a wide range of vocab !

By: annette

annette — Mon, 12 Nov 2007 13:35:14 +0000

interesting poem.. I could feel the power of sorcery and love from that poem

By: kame

kame — Sun, 11 Nov 2007 19:00:50 +0000

lol
nice. omg my vocab not tt strong like yours la
to say tt im a pure lit student is sucha shame
lol

By: Phantasmic

Phantasmic — Sun, 11 Nov 2007 16:28:46 +0000

I don’t know, poems that rhyme sound like nursery rhymes. Lol~

By: hsienny

hsienny — Sun, 11 Nov 2007 15:03:32 +0000

lol. u could be my literature pal. nice poem so dark and full of mystery. making alternating rhymes would be cool too!

By: matt

matt — Sun, 11 Nov 2007 14:21:38 +0000

wide range of vocab. splendid expression. good job man