A sad display of a young girl’s clothes…

The angels were shocked,

the spirits would glow,

right before them was an elaborate show,

on one counter,

small broken teeth on a silver tray,

and a little girl’s bloodied clothes,

laid out carefully in a graphic display,

the angels with horrified looks,

stared at the other table,

that had the girl’s book bag and school books,

sorrow came in droves,

as ghosts were hovering

over the dead girl’s clothes.

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Comments (13)
  • albert1jemi on Jan 12, 2011

    Nice work

  • yes me on Jan 12, 2011

    Yes nice one Frank another clever write

  • martinrojas on Jan 12, 2011

    Excellent work.

  • Stroone on Feb 12, 2011

    man this was very good.. wow

  • Sammy2000 on May 15, 2011

    wow good piece of work

  • Sonrodri on Jan 31, 2012

    wow very sad I loved it

  • Tenuse-rocks on Feb 3, 2012

    this write stings the soul

  • Aptar on Mar 7, 2012

    this was so very sad :(

  • Atanacio on Mar 14, 2012

    thanks for reading guys :)

  • Ospice on Apr 25, 2012

    very sad piece

  • Waltemeyer on May 10, 2012

    my god this was sad I agree with oldpsice

  • Kirkview on May 24, 2012

    oh my so sad :(

  • Jenson45 on May 25, 2012

    this was sad indeed ditto :(

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