Soulful Journey

wonder on Nov 26, 2009

Tags: goal, guide, lamp, mixed bag., soul

The picture and the poem refused to see eye to eye.

At every step of ours

A little lamp is lit

The lamps multiply

One at every trip.

A soulful journey, our goal sublime

As our path we trace

Each milestone we have to cross

Wrapped in earthly grace

Success failures, everything

All at a stride

In a mixed bag they dwell

Our unflinching guide.

The pathways are varied

Red green or blue

They converge in the end

Into a singular hue.

The cumulative effect of the lamps

An electronic shower

Behold the congregation of the souls!

A bliss of the Great Hour.

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Teves on Nov 26, 2009
Nice poem…
Hansika on Nov 26, 2009
nice one
drelayaraja on Nov 26, 2009
very good composition…
ken bultman on Nov 26, 2009
I’m not so sure the two didn’t meld…of course, only the painter/poet can be certain. I see two souls–one on a cool path, another on a warm path. Each are headed for the same destination hence the last line of your poem, Your work continues to be pleasing to the eye and easy on the mind.
Sukhdarshan on Nov 26, 2009
excellent poem and picture with its own story…
cutedrishti8 on Nov 26, 2009
Great poem..
Sunitha Stalin on Nov 26, 2009
Great work
Starpisces on Nov 26, 2009
good work again, Wonder
chitragopi on Nov 26, 2009
Delicious composition. Fitting picture, don\’t doubt it.
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 26, 2009
lovely composed..loved the rhythms!! gud work!
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 26, 2009
just gr888888888888
Frances Lawrence on Nov 27, 2009
I liked this very much, nicely written.
Jane Jane on Nov 27, 2009
well written.
Mr Ghaz on Nov 27, 2009
very nice one..loved this poem..nice words too cheers
My Facebook on Nov 27, 2009
Brilliant poetry. Well done.
Aiyanna on Nov 27, 2009
Lovely composition!!!
Ruby Hawk on Nov 27, 2009
Very nice,
Eunice Tan on Nov 27, 2009
Isn’t it a wonder? Great piece
xtine on Nov 27, 2009
Very inspiring! Nice work you got here!
dgraphicrookie on Nov 28, 2009
very nice poem. as always…
Ruby Hawk on Nov 30, 2009
Another I like.
abhishek40914 on Dec 1, 2009
nice poem
xtine on Dec 2, 2009
Nice work. Hoping to see more of your posts!
mkd1788 on Dec 2, 2009
great theme… very well expressed
Jenna Christiansen on Dec 8, 2009
Nice job…And, I love the use of the photo, it set the scene for this perfectly….ty
V rank on Dec 24, 2009
this is a well-written poem…!
ladydryle on Dec 24, 2009
brilliant… what a lovely poem
qasimdharamsy on Jan 9, 2010
Nice poem…I like it….
NishaMeledath on Feb 28, 2010
Brilliant play of words. There is a deep spiritual truth that you have tried to unravel here with the simplicity that is quiet daring and beautiful to the senses. I loved the picture though I do not find myself capable of commenting on its relevance with your theme. As far as I am concerned, they both go well together.

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