Sour

R G Lowry on Sep 30, 2011

Tags: bitter, felt, find, leaves, love, Once, Ourselves, seperate, slips, slowly, sour, taste, tragedy, turned, waste

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Love has turned sour.

What a tragedy

what a waste

love has turned sour

and leaves a bitter taste

and everything we once felt

slowly slips away

and we find ourselves going

our seperate ways

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Gerard Galvestini on Oct 1, 2011
Ouch. Must have been a painful feeling to have love withered away…..
redphile on Oct 1, 2011
short and sad..

(but nice poem )

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