http://authspot.com/poetry/space/ Sat, 21 Nov 2009 22:18:43 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://authspot.com/poetry/space/comment-page-1/#comment-444327 lolz Fri, 17 Jul 2009 21:22:25 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/space/#comment-444327 that was so bad it was funny. first of all, your grammar is revolting. second, try not to use the same words over and over again. like space. even though that's what the whole poem is about. third, spelling. 4th, the whole idea. you say itll take years to map the universe? try BILLIONS of years. and you astronauts spend their whole life exploring space? most go up for a few days and never go back... that was so bad it was funny. first of all, your grammar is revolting. second, try not to use the same words over and over again. like space. even though that’s what the whole poem is about. third, spelling. 4th, the whole idea. you say itll take years to map the universe? try BILLIONS of years. and you astronauts spend their whole life exploring space? most go up for a few days and never go back…

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