well expressed.
wishing you the best and to your son,too.

A beautiful poem which shows such a depth of understanding. I have worked with autisic children many times in my life, through teaching, Communication and understanding are so important.

Christine

Well done. My GF’s nephew is autistic and your poem is right on.

This is a very nice poem.

What a touching poem revivor, beautiful.

Beautiful, and shows that you are able to reach your son despite this disorder. This way you can teach him and help him to reach his potential. Great poem.
Monica.

I like this one a lot, revivor.
It has the perfect blend of youthful rhymes and thoughts that it makes for a wonderful tribute to a young son in such a condition. Thanks for sharing this, it is truly inspiring.

This is a beautiful and touching poem.

Very beautiful and inspirational; thanks for sharing!

-Fresh Writing

Very touching! I really enjoyed this one. It’s written from the heart.

Made me cry! A fab poem hun xx

Without the for word, the poem would not have impacted as well, nice touch. Friend, fan, smile

Lovely – only someone that knew and loved this little boy would have been able to write this – moving

Makes my eyes misty.

Nice…

I like the metaphor- keeping his life like spaghetti bolognese.

There is no love greater, no bond stronger, than the gift that is shared between a child and their parent. It may seem like their world is their own at times, but every now and then, a glimpse of what it’s like, no matter how simple, can sometimes be a wonderful thing.

beautiful

This touches a chord. That spaghetti picture explains so much more than a text book could. Thanks.

very touching..

this is lovely. it must be hard to raise a child with autism

Delightful and fun! I like this immensely!

A very thoughtful poem for you to write. It really shows your understanding of your son.

Hi, great poem, I love poems!!

very moving work, that unbreakable father and son bond, your ability to connect and empathise with your son’s view of the world, made the tears well up for me – thankyou

very touching, and shows a strong father son relationship. Keep it up.
Monica.

How very thoughtful. You are a very nice father. I’m sure your son loves you so much.

very touching poem.

Great poem. It is sometimes difficult for outsiders to understand the struggles that we go through, and this poem is a fantastically simple way to bring understanding.

Wonderful poem!!

Excellent poem. Great father son relationship.

Great poem serving a good therapeutic need. Keep up the great job.
Monica

A lovely way to describe the world of an individual with autism.
In a group, but still alone; and he perfers it that way.
Great way with words you have there.

Excellent, thought inspiring. This is something we all relate to and are aware of but never usually focus on it unless directed as in your poem.

nice okay good

great story

Nice to write about these things. I hope your son is doing well.

Very touching poem. Thanks for sharing!!

Very enjoyable and understanding

Great Poem,
Great Tree,
Great Pallett!

That’s beautiful.

very touchy..

You do understand your child so well. This is so thoughtful with tender caring. I hope you all are well. Learning is so special to me. Thank You

What an insightful and thought-provoking piece.

This is a beautiful and inspirational poem, and I hope you have a framed copy in yours sons room, autographed by his dad…

So good. Glad I found it. My last years in teaching were involved with helping an autistic 15 year old get his Standard Grade English.

A very touching piece about your son and his outlook on life. he seems happy in his little world.

Christine

This poem is absolutely beautiful. I love the simplicity of the poem as it expresses your strong bond with your son.