Special Necklace

Darla Cooke on Jul 8, 2009

Tags: beads, Iridescent, jewelry, necklace

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Made with pretty iridescent beads.

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You promised to make me a necklace,

one with pretty iridescent beads.

Once you have completed it,

you will tenderly fasten the string,

around my long and slender neck.

My heart will ache with renewed hope,

as the necklace glistens in the sunlight.

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Comments (13)

Tanya Wallace on Jul 8, 2009
A heartfelt beautifully worded poem.Great work Darla.
Ramalingam on Jul 8, 2009
Let the necklace reach you at the earliest and put you in a happy mood.Thanks for sharing.
Francy on Jul 8, 2009
c=nice poem…keep it up
Keep sharing.
rajeev bhargava on Jul 8, 2009
a really beautiful neckless, very colourful and exotic complimented by a matching poem.
ken bultman on Jul 8, 2009
A pleasant little poem.
mdartist on Jul 8, 2009
Very pretty pic and poem too!
joey manfredo on Jul 8, 2009
like the metaphor!
goodselfme on Jul 8, 2009
Nice necklace poem
Joie Schmidt on Jul 9, 2009
Very beautiful*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Ruby Hawk on Jul 9, 2009
Beautiful and so is the necklace.
RS Wing on Jul 10, 2009
Great poem, short and sweet, that’s what so envious to me regarding poets, so much is said in very few words, imagery, emotions, and thoughts threaded through a small hole or window of opportunity too express oneself, great work.
sheba on Jul 11, 2009
Another short and simple poem! thanks for sharing!
CutestPrincess on Jul 28, 2009
simple yet so cute…

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