Speechless

jesse lennon on Aug 5, 2009

Well the title explains it all.

Pacing through the halls,

browsing, wanting, discovering, or waiting for someone or something.

Bright as the sun,darker than the moonlight.

Striding outside,

looking,watching,waiting,

for what,

could happen next,

or talks that can change your mind,

or friends that don’t seem friends anymore,

drifting away,

without a thing to say.

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Comments (14)

alc on Aug 5, 2009
Nice piece of work I liked it a lot!! Keep up the great job!
ladybaby on Aug 6, 2009
Nice poem.
lh on Aug 7, 2009
SPEECLESS INDEED
Ruby Hawk on Aug 11, 2009
Oh, you tell it well, friends come and they go.
Hell Bitch on Aug 14, 2009
Nothing to be done when you can’t say hello anymore, but can hardly stand to say goodbye, either. You do just drift. Well put.
Emma Green on Aug 14, 2009
You really did not lie in the title! Good work
chantell on Aug 16, 2009
very nice
Collette Edwards on Aug 18, 2009
jesse you did a great job on this poem of changing life is always changing nothing ever stays the same, and you say this ever well with silence Keep writting you have talent . I added you as a friend
Mary J McCoy Dressel on Aug 18, 2009
Very Nice. Good Luck with your manuscripts. Keep submitting.
ashan1614 on Aug 19, 2009
It’s a sad thing (most times) when people just drift out of your life. I like this!
livemike on Aug 20, 2009
very well put…..
Milton H Peebles III on Aug 21, 2009
WoW!

Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
Peter Cimino on Aug 27, 2009
Oh how I could relate to this! Awesome piece.
diamondpoet on Oct 14, 2009
That was well written!

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