My sons 1st poem. yes words are misspelled but a nine year old wrote it & I like the childish look of it in my folder so I typed it like he wrote it. Only wish you could see the sloppy rugrat looking handwritting.

When I’m spending time with my deddy

we have lots of fun,

we are happy togeather

just father & son.

We go hunting & fishing

then play on my slip n slide,

then at dark he will seek me as I hide.

Airhockey playstation or eney game,

but when summer is over thats

when we have the most pain.

It’s almost time for school

so now I have to go,

only one day left

I hope it will go slow.

We cry & we hug

we hug & we cry,

Deddy never wants to let go

& nether do I.

Deslyn Locklear

8/12/2010

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