Spoiled

Sheila M on Jul 18, 2009

Tags: Desire, love, my disease, Poetry, sensuality, spoonful of desire, venomous

I know. My mind doesn’t accept reality. So freely I give my love away. Your doormat of emotion, when life isn’t giving you your way.

Your sensuality caresses my mind

in euphoric waves.

The way your breath plays havoc in my ear;

soft, catlike purrrrrrrrrssss.

On the prowl for my devotion.

I love the way you smell.

The touch only your fingers can deliver.

Your kisses offer sweet anticipation.

My mind unable to resist its tease.

I treasure each captivating moment.

Keeping you in the picture box of my mind;

and on my tongue,

the lingering taste of you.

I can’t resist the hunger

reflected in your eyes.

No matter how full of venom,

I still come back for more.

To fill my stomach of the ache you cause.

You know my disease and give me every cure.

This spoonful of desire.

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CHAN LEE PENG on Jul 18, 2009
Lovely poem, and touching too. Have my liked it.
I Have Had Enough on Jul 18, 2009
Bitter, sweet is how I would describe it, I’m glad your still writing.
ken bultman on Jul 18, 2009
Quite captivating; stimulating; curative.
Ramalingam on Jul 18, 2009
Nice poem.
Tanya Wallace on Jul 18, 2009
Wonderfully passionate and erotic poem.Excellent work,your wording is fantastic!
Melody SJAL on Jul 18, 2009
Sweet and passionate.
Lostash on Jul 19, 2009
Good one Sheila!
Ruby Hawk on Jul 19, 2009
well done,
LOVELYHONEY on Jul 19, 2009
a favour taken a favour return

u may like to read my poems

in their turn

good poems u compose

thats why in u

people faith repose
STEVE666 on Jul 20, 2009
Powerful and honest.
poetic enigma on Jul 21, 2009
another great write,
thanks for sharing!
Johanny Lisbeth on Jul 25, 2009
wow!!!! this is something amazing!!!! I love it!!! I guess that muse of yours is working positively. (That makes one of us)
Theresa Johnson on Jul 30, 2009
great poem sheila. very descriptive
Shelly Barclay on Jul 30, 2009
Very good job. Ain’t love grand?
maranatha on Jul 30, 2009
Why venom? That picture halted me and made me go back to re-read. One word completely changed the tone and message for me, from erotic and lovely to erotic and frightening.
katie marie on Jul 30, 2009
very passionate write.
littlemama76 on Jul 30, 2009
very nice write.
Peter Cimino on Jul 30, 2009
HOT and and disturbing at the same time. YIKES! Well done as always!
David Crerand on Jul 30, 2009
this touches anyone who has a pulse. Well done.
Cebah on Jul 31, 2009
Love the poem, encapsulates addictive love. One always gives, the other always takes. Liked.
Alina Beck on Aug 2, 2009
Bittersweet and powerful – lovely work.

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