Spontaneous -with Me

drelayaraja on Nov 12, 2009

Tags: care, elayaraja, love, share, together

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A spontaneous thought on love, care and sharing.

SPONTANEOUS – WITH ME

SPONTANEOUS – WITH ME

Someone in our life we NEED,

To care, share and BOTHER.

Interesting times INDEED,

When we were TOGETHER.

Made me to cry as you FLED,

Could have stayed with me RATHER…

Dr.P.Elayaraja

Chennai

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Comments (7)

Darla Cooke on Nov 12, 2009
Very touching poem!
Teves on Nov 12, 2009
Nice poem…
wonder on Nov 13, 2009
Wholehearted, sad, well composed.
Jane Jane on Nov 13, 2009
nice poem. heartfelt sadness.
Cebah on Nov 13, 2009
Lovely poem. Good choice of image too.
Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 14, 2009
nice. very nice.
Raj the Tora on Nov 2, 2010
wow, very nice lines. Thanks Doc

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