Just the other night I opted to punch the wall rather than my 18 year old son, during an argument. Normally, my fist goes right through the plaster, but this time I hit a stud. ouch!

The pain, harsh, quickly passes through my body

With an interest in lingering but thankful for not

As my face throws away its distorted mask

Leaving me with this question to ask

“Why did I punch the beam that hard?”

Tension built up and anger had surfaced quickly

Reaction became a choice, it was to hit and hit now

Fist formed forcefully as target was in sight

But my judgment was off as I didn’t hit right

“Damn, I really just messed up my hand!”

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  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 28, 2011

    a sprain is powerful

  • hfj on Apr 28, 2011

    Choosing the wall instead of your son was a wise choice, even though i can feel your pain. I know how quickly a teenager can get under your skin, and it takes a lot of restraint on our part to keep from beating them to a pulp, but then better judgement takes over……we hope…..haha Well done.

  • webseowriters on Apr 28, 2011

    lovely poem

  • S.K on Apr 28, 2011

    looks like your son just got lucky……i don’t!! :P

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