The life is just so so.

seeing the spray, what do you think ?

beautiful ? stronger or huge ?but certain not silent.

seeing the spray ,what do you feel ?

its soft ? white or blue ?but certain not science .

spray let me feel that

the life of a people is so small while compared with the spray.

so delicate,so fragile .so life.

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  • chitragopi on Oct 15, 2009

    You are right.

  • mo hoyal on Nov 26, 2009

    Another beautiful one from you! I come from Hawaii where we have these big waves that the surfers love. Me, I am terrified of water!
    When you have some time will you please listen to some of my songs that I sing and write? I would appreciate it-they are on audio in my profile page.
    Kind regards!

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