Spring rippled in this year sweet as a song,and I loved every minute of it. I didn’t even complain about the heat of summer. I took it all in stride, but at the thought of winter, I dread the cold winds while the temps are still in the 90s.

Spring Rippled In

Spring rippled in on a warm emerald breeze

Capering,dancing, pulling on her leash

She breathed on meadows and fields lying fallow

Woke minnows and tadpoles asleep in the shallows

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Old Sol came alive fiery and hot

Summer strolled into the melting pot

We wore our shorts, halters and crops

Climbed the hills till we crested the tops

We hiked the trails and swam in the pools

Walked the board walks and played the fool

We sat on the deck swinging in the breeze

Or lounged on the couch watching limpid TV

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Long summer days were sweet as a song

Now the cool breath of autumn tells me they are gone

Emerald will change to yellow and red

Magenta and orange will raise up their heads

Her Majesty autumn will yank on her leash

She wasn’t cut out to be mild and meek

So pull out your sweaters, mufflers and shawls

The seasons will change in spite of us all

It sounds so forlorn but let it be known

I will suffer the wind freezing my bones

I will shiver,shake, complain and moan

And wish for summer all winter long

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  • ceegirl on Aug 22, 2011

    Great share.

  • mphsglo on Aug 22, 2011

    Very nice. I’m looking forward to the fall. The only drawback is that winter is right behind. :(

  • Socorro Lawas on Aug 23, 2011

    You use of personification and narration are very effective.

  • Christina Noll on Aug 23, 2011

    love summer too! ;)

  • Dreamy777 on Aug 23, 2011

    I like the fall coming too but not winter and the snow

  • ittech on Aug 23, 2011

    thanks good post

  • iloisabel on Aug 23, 2011

    oh! here in my country, Philippines, is very hot. Sometimes I wonder what would it feels like to have a winter season. Nice article.!

  • Farzeela Fee Faisal on Aug 23, 2011

    Awesome, Ruby I never knew you are a poet too :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 23, 2011

    That is a brilliant poem, Ruby. I wish you would write more of them.

  • lapasan on Aug 23, 2011

    In my country, there is only sunny and rainy weather. Reading this poem, I feel that I experience spring.

  • Dennis N OBrien on Aug 23, 2011

    Well written – Spring is about to ripple in here in Australia.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Aug 23, 2011

    Well expressed.

  • Tony McGregor on Aug 23, 2011

    Lovely as spring itself!

  • Eunice Tan on Aug 23, 2011

    Sounds a very lovely place to be visited in summer

  • Atanacio on Aug 23, 2011

    Ruby your poetry is almost as good as your articles… I know articles take alot of work and research and poetry takes a lot of creativity.. but you pulled it off here too.. you are a busy lady.. but man does it pay off in terrific work :) Frank

  • LoveDoctor on Aug 23, 2011

    Lovely work. You should write poems more often. I really like the imagery here especially this line ” Spring rippled in on a warm emerald breeze”

  • Eiddwen on Aug 23, 2011

    A great poem combined with beautiful pictures. .

  • Vedant Goel on Aug 23, 2011

    a great poem..thanks for share

  • papaleng on Aug 23, 2011

    Exceptionally written. like the imagery and personification .

  • LCM Linda on Aug 23, 2011

    Beautiful poem. It seems that you have lovely spring. In my places, spring and autumn are not obvious.

  • erwinkennythomas on Aug 24, 2011

    enthralling!

  • CA Johnson on Aug 25, 2011

    This is a great poem. If the summer could stay cool, I would feel the same way about it lastiing all winter long.

  • Tulan on Aug 26, 2011

    Lovely work,

  • yes me on Aug 29, 2011

    This was great Ruby only last night I felt compelled to write a page for Autumn our fall looks a tad early for me, you have expressed the whole year so well here cheers I’m off to look out the long john’s ha ha ha cheers…
    Nae kiddin
    no kidding

  • PR Mace on Sep 3, 2011

    So well expressed.

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