Springtime

wonder on Oct 10, 2009

Tags: air, crisp, Pops, sun, violin

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Some picture reading done.

The sun pops—-popcorn!

The air coos—-lovelorn:

The earth is—- crisp!

And the juvenile —-lisp;

Prolonged muses of the—-violin,

The squat ‘tablas’ rejoin the floral strings

In the springtime din

A ‘dhin tak dhin’

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Comments (19)

raman13 on Oct 10, 2009
excellent
Mr Ghaz on Oct 11, 2009
Absolutely wonderful! Fab and well-written poem..so creative with nice words as well. well done my friend..Keep it up! Cheers Have my liked it!
ken bultman on Oct 11, 2009
A bit of a lilt to the poetry to fit the spring motif. Not to worry. I have a friend who will translate. lol.
chitragopi on Oct 11, 2009
wow! great. fabulous painting. wanted to give instsnt comment. so no caps. lively poem!
Olivia Van Logum on Oct 11, 2009
Lovely, bouncy poem!
Eunice Tan on Oct 12, 2009
Spring is lovely
martinpm on Oct 12, 2009
good one!!!
CA Johnson on Oct 13, 2009
I really enjoyed your poem and the painting.
Anne McNew on Oct 14, 2009
nice write. keep posting
gdfaisal on Oct 16, 2009
nice poem! musical!!
Jane Jane on Oct 17, 2009
didn’t get some other words.
Jane Jane on Oct 17, 2009
didn\’t get some other words.
K.Reshma on Oct 17, 2009
nice poem
Ruby Hawk on Oct 17, 2009
Lovely painting and poetry.
Teves on Oct 19, 2009
Nice one…
Sourav on Oct 19, 2009
Well written…
Starpisces on Oct 21, 2009
Very special and cute poem..
razumtina on Oct 23, 2009
nice…
SharifaMcFarlane on Feb 5, 2011
Spring is a great time. I like your painting.

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