Stagnant(haiku)

avissado on Feb 6, 2012

Tags: Haiku, Japanese, seasons, stagnant

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Haiku – Japanese poetry form with 17 syllables(5-7-5).

Seasons come and go

Year after year, it follows on-

Stuck on yesterday

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Comments (14)

Dora77 on Feb 6, 2012
Avissado,

Its a good one! write more.
Nidhi Rai on Feb 6, 2012
Wonderful.
girishpuri on Feb 6, 2012
Very nice , Avi.
mdrkarim7 on Feb 6, 2012
Thanks…
lossert on Feb 6, 2012
nice one.,I will also compose my own haiku,thanks for the idea.
lossert on Feb 6, 2012
nice one.,
I will also compose my own haiku,thanks for the idea.
aheed411 on Feb 6, 2012
Very nice
indianwriting on Feb 6, 2012
nice
Safa on Feb 6, 2012
Impressive.
Martin Kloess on Feb 6, 2012
switch follows with flows
Audrey Howitt on Feb 6, 2012
Nice piece!
erwinkennythomas on Feb 6, 2012
clever
Nidhi Rai on Feb 14, 2012
Nice little piece.
Tiki33 on Apr 30, 2012
Very nice!

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