Short poem about a stalker.

He stalks me here,

He stalks there,

He stalks me everywhere,

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Behind a post,

Behind a tree,

It’s his crazy eyes I see,

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  • albert1jemi on Jan 16, 2010

    nice poem

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 16, 2010

    good try….short and nice

  • Frances Lawrence on Jan 16, 2010

    The short phrases of poem convey a sense of fear and unreality. I was stalked a number of years ago, it put my whole family at risk and it ended in violence. It took so long to tie up all those impossible to prove sightings and get people to take it seriously. If you find yourself in this situation report every incident, never underestimate a stalker.

  • Ashley89 on Jan 16, 2010

    Short and straight to the point I liked it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 16, 2010

    It is not nice at all to be stalked. My son had a stalker for years, who even found out where he had moved to. It was very unsettling for him. You say it all in those few words.

    Christine

  • Atanacio on Jan 16, 2010

    love the way you did this stalking poetry..Loved it

  • ken bultman on Jan 16, 2010

    Perhaps he was Jack the Beanstalker.l

  • zoeyclark on Jan 16, 2010

    Stalking is creepy, I will give you that. Catchy poem, though. Kinda got me hooked and got disappointed it was short.

    p.s: There is one adorable fictional stalker though. Seen Mel Gibon’s Jerry Fletcher in Conspiracy Theory? : )

  • willie wondka on Jan 16, 2010

    stalking in the end can become like a drug, once they are hooked you cant get rid of them, nice poem.

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 16, 2010

    Wow Lillyrose, your poem is short but speaks volumes to all readers. You are an amazing writer and one admired by many. Thank You once again for sharing your passion of writing with us all and for giving us more of your creative personality…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • Sourav on Jan 16, 2010

    Short and free flowing…

  • Guy Hogan on Jan 16, 2010

    Stalking is a terrible thing. Years ago I tried ending a relationship with a woman who didn’t want the relationship to end. She wasn’t dangerous but it was a very uncomfortable situation. I haven’t thought about this in years. The poem brought it all back.

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 16, 2010

    Stalkers on Triond. lol. Yeah I am sure. I\’ve gotten some pretty funny emails myself in the past.

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 16, 2010

    lol. jack the beanstalker. hahhhaha ken

  • Darla Beck on Jan 16, 2010

    Being stalked is a very scary experience.

  • AlmaG on Jan 16, 2010

    A very scary experience

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 16, 2010

    better call the police!

  • standingproud on Jan 16, 2010

    oh scary
    but fun
    :)

  • metro7 on Jan 17, 2010

    Some times your imagination can play games with u.but if u r sure
    then it needs to be reported urgently without delay irrespective whether of serious nature or otherwise.nice poem lisa.

  • Patrick Regoniel on Jan 17, 2010

    I wonder why he’s doing that.

  • wonder on Jan 17, 2010

    Lets get together and catch him.

  • XXElleXX on Jan 17, 2010

    A terrifying thing to have happen to you…and when they violate your personal space…you live in constant fear…your poem says it all Lilyrose.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 17, 2010

    I AINT NO STALKER

    BUT LOVE TO BE

    SO THAT YOU CONTINUE

    TO READ MY POETRYHAHAHAHAHAAHLH

  • Steven West on Jan 17, 2010

    Direct poem. Well done.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 17, 2010

    Always report a stalker. They are mentally unbalanced.

  • STEVE666 on Jan 18, 2010

    Damn! You spotted me!

  • Duff D Moss on Jan 19, 2010

    This could be a Dr Suess for adults :-)

  • deep blue on Jan 19, 2010

    Wish it wasn’t true. Were those cat eyes you see light up in the dark?

  • Geomorphosis on Jan 22, 2010

    Who is that stalker. I’m going to stalk him for you lol

  • Anupam Kachroo on Jan 23, 2010

    haha ..scary

  • RoughRoad on Jan 24, 2010

    Short but descriptive. I can almost imagine someone on the opposite side of the road, staring at me! The only difference is that I am not that scared coz I am a male, lol!

  • oldster on Jan 26, 2010

    As long as it’s only his eyes Lilly, you’re relatively safe. If he starts wearing raincoats in summer, wear steel toecapped boots.

  • T. S. Lewis on Jan 26, 2010

    What did you do him Enjoyed it

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Feb 11, 2010

    Call the police and collect as much evidence as you can yourself.

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