Short poem about a stalker.
He stalks me here,
He stalks there,
He stalks me everywhere,
Behind a post,
Behind a tree,
It’s his crazy eyes I see,
good try….short and nice
The short phrases of poem convey a sense of fear and unreality. I was stalked a number of years ago, it put my whole family at risk and it ended in violence. It took so long to tie up all those impossible to prove sightings and get people to take it seriously. If you find yourself in this situation report every incident, never underestimate a stalker.
Short and straight to the point I liked it!
It is not nice at all to be stalked. My son had a stalker for years, who even found out where he had moved to. It was very unsettling for him. You say it all in those few words.
love the way you did this stalking poetry..Loved it
Perhaps he was Jack the Beanstalker.l
Stalking is creepy, I will give you that. Catchy poem, though. Kinda got me hooked and got disappointed it was short.
p.s: There is one adorable fictional stalker though. Seen Mel Gibon’s Jerry Fletcher in Conspiracy Theory? : )
stalking in the end can become like a drug, once they are hooked you cant get rid of them, nice poem.
Wow Lillyrose, your poem is short but speaks volumes to all readers. You are an amazing writer and one admired by many. Thank You once again for sharing your passion of writing with us all and for giving us more of your creative personality…
Mickey Pig Knuckles
Short and free flowing…
Stalking is a terrible thing. Years ago I tried ending a relationship with a woman who didn’t want the relationship to end. She wasn’t dangerous but it was a very uncomfortable situation. I haven’t thought about this in years. The poem brought it all back.
Stalkers on Triond. lol. Yeah I am sure. I\’ve gotten some pretty funny emails myself in the past.
lol. jack the beanstalker. hahhhaha ken
Being stalked is a very scary experience.
A very scary experience
better call the police!
Some times your imagination can play games with u.but if u r sure
then it needs to be reported urgently without delay irrespective whether of serious nature or otherwise.nice poem lisa.
I wonder why he’s doing that.
Lets get together and catch him.
A terrifying thing to have happen to you…and when they violate your personal space…you live in constant fear…your poem says it all Lilyrose.
I AINT NO STALKER
BUT LOVE TO BE
SO THAT YOU CONTINUE
TO READ MY POETRYHAHAHAHAHAAHLH
Direct poem. Well done.
Always report a stalker. They are mentally unbalanced.
Damn! You spotted me!
This could be a Dr Suess for adults
Wish it wasn’t true. Were those cat eyes you see light up in the dark?
Who is that stalker. I’m going to stalk him for you lol
Short but descriptive. I can almost imagine someone on the opposite side of the road, staring at me! The only difference is that I am not that scared coz I am a male, lol!
As long as it’s only his eyes Lilly, you’re relatively safe. If he starts wearing raincoats in summer, wear steel toecapped boots.
What did you do him Enjoyed it
Call the police and collect as much evidence as you can yourself.
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