This is the lyrics of the first song I had ever written for the one I loved….I was 16…so,the wordings are not that great..Even then…I hope you enjoy it! :D .

Stayed up all night..

Thinking about you..

The lovely smile on your face

The hint of Shyness

As you slowed your pace..

Thinking about the time..

When we first met

I’m thankful to the girl

‘Cause of whom we met

I’m thankful to our friend

Who made our first date

I’m thankful for

All the things you do for me

I just wanna thank you

For being so close to me

You make me smile

The small talks that we share at night

The songs that we sing

The thoughts that we share

Its always good to know

That you care

Did I ever tell you

That you are so sweet..?

The sweetest a guy

Could ever be

For all the things

That I see in you

Stan Li…I..Love you…..

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  • aroosamorose on Aug 28, 2011

    Ngala it’s perfect it shows how much u love someone.

  • Ngala Min on Aug 28, 2011

    @aroosamorose…. thank you =) love does bring out the best in people

  • Walden Gray on Aug 29, 2011

    It really shows the love…that is inside you!!…….Very nicely expressed!!!…..its ‘LOVE’ly!!……..^_^

  • jojo732 on Aug 29, 2011

    The words show how you wete feeling at that time,the words really expressed how you felt about that person…fabulous..

  • Ngala Min on Aug 29, 2011

    Walden Gray…thanks a ton..! =)

  • Ngala Min on Aug 29, 2011

    jojo732….thank you!i’m glad you liked it =)

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 29, 2011

    That is such a beautiful and romantic song. Well done.

  • Ngala Min on Aug 29, 2011

    Thank you from my heart Christine =)

  • papaleng on Aug 30, 2011

    Such a lovely song!

  • Ngala Min on Aug 30, 2011

    Thank You papaleng! =)

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