A free verse(verse-libre)

I sail over oceans unknown,
On a boat made of hopes and dreams.
A thousand waves come and go
And my destinations unknown
But I know that somewhere past that sunset,
Past that majestic red sunset...
My true love waits for me.
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  • Gail Cavanaugh on Mar 18, 2011

    Short but sweet.

  • V rank on Mar 18, 2011

    VEry cute.

  • Kosmin on Mar 19, 2011

    Nice one! I like the idea of hoping that one day you will meet your true love.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 19, 2011

    simply beautiful words of hope and desire ,
    beyond the sunset awaits,
    a newer sunrise for me
    hopefully for thee

    wear your own attitude friend,
    others are out to nudify you,
    take care
    be aware
    of flatters too.
    lh

    and thank u so much for ur lovely comments
    and your work is
    just gr88888888888888888

  • serenitybubble on Mar 20, 2011

    Aww so cute, i like it. Franklin stole the words from my fingertips.

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