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Staple Smile, Jesus Bobblehead

Kip Spleen on Dec 16, 2009
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A random poem.

staple smile

jesus bobblehead

total happy eclipse

rows upon rows

corn starts a poppin’

to look to the sky

to blind one’s own eye

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  • Teves on Dec 16, 2009

    Nice poem…

  • Mhack on Dec 16, 2009

    What the WTF man. You know you have some amazing work, but I think you are just grasping at straws with randomness here and I for one refuse to pander to it. I know you can do much better, and while this does have it’s novelty I refuse to like it in the least. Not to be hyper critical but in so much to inspire you and let you know, yes the world isn’t full of just yes men and praise and glory, put your mind to work and show your true genius.

  • Kip Spleen on Dec 16, 2009

    Thanks Mike, I appreciate your honesty. You are right, I can write better than this, I spent hardly any time on this and was just fooling around. A little unnecessarily rude…

  • Hansika on Dec 16, 2009

    thanks for the share….

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