Just another poem that expresses who I am.

If you wonder why I capitol words like "us" or "we" it’s because I find them too be appropriate enough to show the respect of a capitol letter, its a combination of people. and I feel you should capitolize a noun:A person, place, or thing.

Who will see the end?
See eye to eye in an endless stare?
Blinks are okay, We’ll have many rematches.
Because as We blink, Our life flashes by Us.
 
We tend to stare at those who stand by Us.
Because We feel safe by the protection they provide Us.
So I stand here today because my stare is fightless.
I’d give my life too keep this safety among Us.

So if it’s just Us, and You steal my breath away.
The last breath I take, It was too see You again.
but, don’t weep me in sorrow, You’ll see me again, one Tomorrow.

Just remember that day.

as You were the last one.

that I ever took a breath for.

but lucky for you, this wont be the last poem I write You,

because when I die,

I wanna be with You.

0
Liked it
Comments (4)
  • donyorkd61 on Apr 6, 2011

    be happy together is good enough. I am not asking for things that I could never get.^
    Ferrari replica watches

  • donyorkd61 on Apr 6, 2011

    be happy together is good enough. I am not asking for things that I could never get.^
    Ferrari replica watches

  • Zach Braatz on Apr 6, 2011

    Thankyou for taking the time too read. I appreciate it! Where I found myself going with this was just expressing the feeling I get when I look into someone’s eyes whom means alot too me.

  • Cecilia vega on Apr 26, 2011

    very good article. would be great if you want to write every day. Immediately this blog to your favorites. Thank you for the info

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading