Starlight

Kate Smedley on Mar 27, 2009

Tags: arts, Haiku, light, Poetry, space, Stars

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The radiance of the stars.

Countless lustrous stars

The wonders of creation

Angel guides through space

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revivor on Mar 27, 2009
good little poem
and pic!!
papaleng on Mar 27, 2009
this is cute and have a nice message.
Joe Dorish on Mar 27, 2009
Ahhhhhh, what is out there?
Alina Beck on Mar 27, 2009
Lovely little haiku – thanks for posting.
Monica Sappleton on Mar 27, 2009
Another effective Haiku. You are getting good at this Kate. In no time you’ll be a master. Well done
Monica
Christine Ramsay on Mar 27, 2009
That is such a good one. well done.

Christine
Bullwinkle Muse on Mar 27, 2009
Many of my favorite evenings have been spent looking skyward.
Elizabeth Abbott on Mar 27, 2009
Very well captured! I like this too. So many venues with the stars..
Mr Ghaz on Mar 27, 2009
Lovely poem! simple but very attractive. I liked it! nice pics too. thanx for sharing
Tarra Buluran on Mar 27, 2009
Brief but it tells everything. I like it!
CHAN LEE PENG on Mar 27, 2009
Wow, very powerful haiku!
MrZebra84 on Mar 27, 2009
Beautiful haiku! I love the pic too. The last line is intriguing.
Darla Smith on Mar 27, 2009
Great haiku and I really like the pic.
Suppee XX on Mar 27, 2009
I’m there!
Mrs M on Mar 27, 2009
I can tell you have been working on your short poems. The last line is my favorite.
PR Mace on Mar 27, 2009
Very good. Well written. I could see the stars in my mind.
Daisy Peasblossom on Mar 27, 2009
Beautiful. The epitome of haiku. This one leaves an image that plays around and around in ones head.
hfj on Mar 27, 2009
Nice haiku. beautiful words and picture. Well done.
ML Sheldon on Mar 27, 2009
A very nice haiku. The right words always give the perfect feeling, even if they are few in number.
lindalulu on Mar 27, 2009
Very nice!
F J McCarthy on Mar 27, 2009
Lovely Haiku Kate, thank you.
rutherfranc on Mar 27, 2009
beautiful take on starlight.. this really shines through..
Likha on Mar 27, 2009
Want you to know I dropped by and continue to admire your works.
Ruby Hawk on Mar 27, 2009
beautiful,
clay hurtubise on Mar 27, 2009
Thanks, that was nice!
Clay
seashell66 on Mar 27, 2009
Very refreshing!
Eunice Tan on Mar 27, 2009
So meaningful
jo oliver on Mar 28, 2009
very beautiful
miraj on Mar 28, 2009
an excellent haiku,loved the last line.

my deepest respect and gratitude,Kate
LOVE IS ALL

Walk in beauty change the world.
Poetic Enigma on Mar 28, 2009
This is a great haiku,
very well written
and beautifully expressed
Liane Schmidt on Mar 28, 2009
Beautiful and mystical*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
macon on Mar 28, 2009
very cute!
Unofre Pili on Mar 28, 2009
That’s pretty profound piece.
Adam Henry Sears on Mar 28, 2009
Hi, Kate, that is a nice little senryu. Very imagistic and actually could be taken to view the contrast between religion and science. Good job!
deehackett on Mar 28, 2009
You said a lot with three simple lines. I like it. Nicely done.
Betty Carew on Mar 28, 2009
Excellent job Kate very descriptive and so few words , well done
Jeffrey B. Merrow on Mar 28, 2009
i liked it i take actual asronomy pics like this great work good picture
nobert soloria bermosa on Mar 28, 2009
beautiful haiku,nice picture too
Ella Currence on Mar 28, 2009
Very nice and short and straight to the message I like it.
CutestPrincess on Mar 30, 2009
nice haiku again, kate!
QuinMonty86 on Mar 31, 2009
I tried a haiku only once, and it will never be done by me again!! Yours is cute and means something and inspires, all in 3 little lines. Love the pic, too.
James E Strickland III on Apr 2, 2009
Beautiful. Will make sure I reserve My Angel to guide me thru space.
S A JOHNSON on Apr 9, 2009
Wonderful work

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