I wrote this poem for my boo red.

when i first met red the same night we went outside to the park and looked up and the stars that was shining so bright with him standing behide me breathing on my neck. he is so sweet and kind but than the thug side comes out and i love that part about him to it turns me on but when we are alone we always take long walks and the stars be out there shining so bright.but when i am with him i feel like i am touching the stars. he is the best man i could ever ask for.

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  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Jan 5, 2010

    Your description turns out to be exactly the same one a brother was telling me that black women seek in a mate. He was angry about it at the time.

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