Starting Fresh

Phoenix Montoya on Aug 1, 2010

Tags: forgiveness poem, friend poem, friendship poem, starting fresh

To forgive is to forget… literally!

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I have seen your face,

a really pleasant one.

Still my reluctance.

Have you done something wrong?

I have heard you laugh,

and it touched my senses.

Yet again my doubt,

to feel sudden coldness.

Who are you my friend?

Have I met you before?

You offered me aid,

then you let me fall hard.

But that was a blur,

I can never recall.

Walk for the future,

Come join me, take my hand.

Never mind the past,

yesterday is long gone.

Today is a good start,

to know a friend once more.

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PARAM on Aug 1, 2010
Lovely stuff….
Jimmy Shilaho on Aug 1, 2010
A very good poem phoenix.
drelayaraja on Aug 1, 2010
Nice poem friend.
papaleng on Aug 1, 2010
ang ganda-ganda naman, and the message is so endearing..
Anuradha Ramkumar on Aug 1, 2010
Gr8 poem.
heidiefernandez on Aug 2, 2010
ang ganda Phoenix…. my friend…
Kaye TM on Aug 2, 2010
true…
Anj M on Aug 2, 2010
Nice
Anj M on Aug 2, 2010
Beautiful
Starpisces on Aug 2, 2010
Nice poem, well done friend
drishti8 on Aug 2, 2010
Great piece of work.
zoeyclark on Aug 4, 2010
Great poem but I am not sure I agree with the idea, lol:D
Likha on Aug 5, 2010
Great way to begin moving on. Think positive di ba?
FaceOff on Aug 5, 2010
Nice post
Ruby Hawk on Aug 6, 2010
We can forgive an offense but it’s harder to forget.
Tulan on Aug 6, 2010
We can’t redo yesterday but we can make a new start today.
yes me on Aug 7, 2010
Like this one cheers
zoeyclark on Aug 14, 2010
my favorite part is the last 4 lines! great poem over all and an even better ending:))
1hopefulman on Aug 16, 2010
That’s a great attitude expressed in your poem.
carissimi on Aug 19, 2010
love this…
Ubel Ein on Oct 10, 2010
To forgive and truly forget requires a heart of gold. This is golden.
mtrguanlao on Mar 22, 2011
Love the message of your poem friend!
ittech on Dec 1, 2011
very good messgae
ittech on Dec 11, 2011
I have bet your boldness, in truth pleasurable I. my hesitancy.nice poem.
FX777222999 on Dec 19, 2011
Moving on for friendship or love.
yes me on Apr 7, 2012
Cheers Phoenix

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